I
disappeared on the night before my twelfth birthday
I
disappeared on the night before my twelfth birthday. I cannot remember
anything. The last thing I can remember is falling asleep in my bed after
decorating the cake for my birthday. It looked like a land of sweets. The grass
was marshmallows the clouds were made of candyfloss and the trees were made of
chocolate and mint chocolate for the leaves. It looked so delicious with that
layer of buttercream icing and all the little animals made of fondant icing.
Just thinking about the outside of the cake makes your mouth water. So when I
woke up there was a flash, everything was dark and it felt like I was falling
into a large hole. My parents were probably worried when they saw my empty bed.
Then suddenly, the world lit up again but I was not in the world that we live
in I was in a different world a very different world.
The
strange thing about this world I was brought to was that the grass felt softer
than normal, the sky looked much nicer than it does in our world and then I saw
a cloud it looked like candyfloss. Suddenly it hit me the clouds were really
candyfloss and the ground was…………….. Marshmallows. Then I realised that the whole
world was made of sweets and it looked like my birthday cake. However, it
couldn’t be, could it? I stood up and a bunch of little creatures came up to me
and welcomed me “greetings master, we give you many thanks”. I was like “what
do you mean, I didn’t do anything?” The creatures then said surprised “yes you
did you killed the meanie” I was really confused “who is this meanie you said I
killed?” They then whispered “the tiger of WoooooooHaaaaaaang”. I was so
surprised that I muttered, “They’re scared of a tiger”, but the creatures heard
and they told me “The tiger of WoooooooHaaaaaaang took all of our munchies and
chased us out of our trees; he was chasing us when you dropped out of the sky
and squashed him”. Then I shouted proudly “Your welcome little ……………” a little
creature whispered “Munchkins”. Therefore, I tried again “Your welcome little
…munchkins”.
I thought this was a good time to ask the
munchkins “How do I get back home?” and the munchkins said puzzled “You are
home master? Why do you say you are not home?” I was confused, why did they say
I was home? Therefore, I said, “I can assure you little munchkins I do not live
here”. Next, I begged “please can I go home” and the munchkins answered,
“certainly master, where is this place you call home?” So I told them my
address. Then “CLICK” everything went black again and I couldn’t see the
munchkins or the world of sweets anymore.
When I
woke up again I was back in my room in our world, the real world. I didn’t tell
anyone about my adventure in this land full of sweets. Then I remembered it was
my birthday, so I went downstairs to a breakfast of pancakes with maple syrup,
Nutella, jam, lemon and sugar. I had a great birthday. However, it still left
me to wonder was my visit to the land full of sweets real or was it just a
dream about my birthday because the land full of sweets looked just like the
decorations on my birthday cake. Unfortunately, nobody will ever know if the
dream I had was real or not.
i loved it - Grace B
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